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Hahaha nah i like them shorter then that because i am meant to wear glasses on the computer, and normally i do, but i dont know where they are at the moment, so i prefer the chapters to be short then that! LOL!

My eyes just get tired with the black on white setup of FanFiction.

Haha yeah same here...LOL! It gets annoying, especially when i am reading an awesome fic and then my eyes are killing me too much and it is at a good point...LOL!

I know. My mom does that with IEWIS and my eyes do it really late at night when she's asleep. It sucks. But I'm trying to figure out cures. Washing my face or just splashing it with cold water helps.

Hahahaha oh well, some are worth long chapters...

One thing i can handle in Fanfics is when the grammar is really bad, like there was this one i was trying to read, and it was awesome, but the grammar and punctuation was so bad i had to stop!

I can stand quite a few grammar mistakes if the story is good enough. Like IEWIS. But if the story sucks and the grammar isn't understandable, I'll just stop. People on FanFic really screw up a LOT. Some of them shouldn't even be posting stories.

Oh i know, like there are some that dont even use proper punctuation, it is like it is all in one long breath. But i dont mind some mistakes as i know that mine arent perfect...LOL!

My grammar isn't perfect, but I at least use a spell checker for obvious mistakes. Most people don't even do that.

Anyway. I'm typing up Chapter Two right now and I'll post it on FF eventually. I still have another story in progress on there that I haven't updated in months.

Here's Chapter Two. Sorry if it's kinda boring and a lot of rambling. That's what happens when I have writer's block.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5349082/2/A_Lily_Among_the_Thorns

I read it! And i added your story to my fav's...

Awesome!

Ugh. Bit of writer's block. I'm making poor Jasper sound like such a jerk.

Writers block SUCKS! LOL! But im sure you will work it out, and i will read more, and because it is you i will keep reading, even though i normally stop a fic if Jacob isnt in it near the start! LOL!

Chapter four will have more Jake. I'm adding it just for you. I'm at the library right now and I'll go write more later on probably. They're going to La Push to hang out for a bit. So Alice, Jake, and Tenny are going to be in his garage.

i left you both a review! lol. sister and tenny i mean! lol.

Lol. I got yours when I woke up and checked my email. Thanks! Woo. I just hope I don't completely ruin the story later on.

I am sure you wont ruin the story dude! And i look forward to some Jake-ness....

And Mary - LOL @ your review of my story, it made me laugh so hard! LOL!

I will ruin it. I usually do. Ugh. I hate it! But oh well. It's not that important.

why in hell cant I see your URL??? I clicked and stupid FF said I cant enter ¬¬

Oh. I deleted the second chapter because I've decided to start over. I'll post the new second chapter in a while, I guess.

haha it wasnt a bad chapter sister!

No, I liked the chapter okay, but it was just so boring that it didn't give me any good ideas for the rest of the story. So I'm changing it so they attend Yale University and the Cullens live about forty minutes outside of New Haven, CT, in Essex, CT. They're going to have all night classes. It just gives me more room to work that way because Forks has already been used.

haha good point, good point!

Now I'm on Chapter Two of the rewrite and it's much better.

Im just waiting for you to bring Jake into it! LOL!

Jake will be in Chapter Three for a shopping trip. Anything you want him to buy you or some place you want to make out?