Currently without a title...

Okay, so I got really tired of writer's block with my novels and so on, so I decided to return to short stories for now. They're more fun to write and less frustrating.

Basically, this one is about Jasper as a vampire and then an Alice-based girl who is human. Edward's girlfriend is a vampire named MaRai. Mixture of Mary and RaiRai. Then Taylor is going to attend Forks High School and he'll date someone named Tenny later on. Sorry this chapter is so freaking short, but I just spent two hours looking for the remote and never found it. I'm too tired to write something really long, so here it is:

Chapter One: Battle

Jasper's POV

I crouched down, waiting.

I needed to hunt.

It was only a deer. I used to hunt them as a young boy in Texas. Now it wasn't a sport with my father; it was survival.

I kept trying to tell myself that Carlisle would never ask me to do something I couldn't do, but Forks was a small town. A family of seven in a town that small...

If I slipped and we disappeared over night, who else would they blame?

I ducked my head, my nostrils filling with the sweet smell of the deer's blood. It was in times like this where I remembered how calming a deep breath was while I was human. Now it inflamed my throat.

My hands shook with the instincts taking over.

I had already lost this battle.

I prayed, for the first time in years, that the loss now would result in a victory later.

I closed my eyes and pounced.

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And yes, that's all I have. I'll write more later on sometime.

hahaha love it! MaRai!!!!! RAIRAI! yay us!!! EEEEE! LMAO!

Lol. You guys will be too busy screwing Edward to have a huge part in the story though.

hhahahaha you will hear no complaining from me.

Sophie, i love the way your mind works, this is awesome. I will so read this...ahahahaha....love it.

I lied, Tenny. No Taylor, but I put Jake in as the main girl's friend. I am going to have to change a few things so I don't end up making horrible jokes. The hair is SHORT! And he will be muscular and "innocent", don't worry. And madly in love with Tenny in the story. Jake annoys me less than Taylor, so I had to change the name.

But I have like two pages of the second chapter and Jaspie's so hot! OME! This is giggling material already. I only wish I had some new movie to watch. I'm SO bored! This is usually when I turn off the tv and go watch a movie. Gr. Anyway.

TheRealBella wrote:Lol. You guys will be too busy screwing Edward to have a huge part in the story though.

Oh crap, I sooooooo saw this coming

Lol. Of course you did! I have to make Jasper ultra cute for StepSis though.I have some cute stuff planned. It won't be until a few chapters in though.

Can't wait! I like to imagine all this like if its true! its so fun. Edward is lucky I cant picture a MaRai, he just has to girlfriends in complete agreement with their situation xD

hale yes! me and rairai would share nicely i think! ROFL!

I love the MaRai idea, Soph. LOL. I can share Edward of course. Hmmm... Why not add your name, too? Like add an "e" at the end, MaRaiE?

How do you even pronounce that? Sorry I just had to say it xD

MAR-A-EEEE! ROFL! i love it!

Ok well im glad Jacob annoys you less then at least one person in the world....but it still sucks that the one person is Taylor...LOL! And anyway, the story sounds awesome, you have one vivid imagination dude! !LOL! Totally cant wait to read and visualise, because i picture everything as real when i read! So it should be interesting to say the least! LOL! YAY for Jake being in there....and gosh dont be too mean, but it is your story. And as long as he is with Tenny i will be HAPPY.

I'm not that mean to Jacob, just some teasing later on. I finished a short Chapter Two earlier and I'm going to bed SUPER early tonight because my dad keeps trying to call me after I said I didn't want to talk to him. I'm just coming on here to look at some pictures of a Porsche 911 Turbo.

Hahaha thats ok, its your story, you can do what you want, i mean, people werent to happy with what i did to Edward in my fic on TwiFo, but it has kept them reading....LOL!

Lol. I haven't read it yet. TwiFo screws up my computer. I hate it. Gr. I have to think of a title for my story though. It's been annoying me. I might steal my novel's title, lol.

Hahaha well i am no good with names...but i do know i am interested to read this, i havent really read any Jasper stuff yet, and i would give it a shot...

And yeah, TwiFo has been effing up on me as well, and i got an email from one of the girls because they need to know what will happen with Edward and if Carlisle can save Sam! LOL! I have like 7 chapters up on fanfiction.net as well....LOL!

I'm working on Chapter Three right now, so I'm gonna go do that after I run after my stupid dog. She jumped the fence. I'll be back later tonight probably. Hope uni isn't too boring.

Hahaha nah it should be alright, i will do the next chapter of my Edward and Jacob fic, which will mean i get $70 off Kelly as this will be the seventh chapter...LOL!

Wow! nice! I need $70. That would be amazing. I'm writing so slowly these days. And the chapters are so short too! Maybe it's just because I'm used to writing novels and creating my own characters, but seriously. Like Chapter Two of this story was ten pages or something like that, which is more like seven or eight typed up.

That is still pretty long, on my fics i average every chapter between 7 and 9 typed pages....Because i want people to read the entire thing, and it is harder to read on the computer then on paper.

That is true. That's one thing I have with IEWIS. It's so long that I can't read much at a time. Because my mom and because my eyes hurt.

Yeah same as this one fic i am in LOVE with, it is my fav fic ever, but the chapters are so long that i can never read as much as i want to. I prefer them to be of an OK length, not to long, and not to short, i hate it when the chapters are too short.

I like the chapters to be about like 10,000 words or so, and then after that it can get hard to concentrate, especially because I have really bad eyes.