Sooooo... I finally found the courage to post my fanfic here. I'll be posting an excerpt of it. I just finished Chapter 7. I have some later chapters finished, but I'm still working on the in-betweens, to make sure the plot doesn't clash.
This excerpt is actually part of the later chapters. It starts with:
"Okay, so how about Kristen?" I asked. I was feeling rather stupid now for having asked that question. I hid my face under my arm.
"You should know better than to believe those stories. I'm here, which roughly translated, I'd rather die than stay away from you."
"Straight right out from the book," I muttered.
"Hey, I am supposed to know what's in the book. Blame it on your Bella Swan."
"Oh, shut up Mr. Know-it-all."
This kind of banter was becoming a rather natural occurrence these days. There isn't a day without him & me having this verbal sparring. Not that I'm complaining. I rather like it. It gives me the excuse to talk to him. He seemed not to mind, either. Which is perfect.
"Have you read all 4 books?" I asked. I really didn't know why I was asking. I guess I just wanted to have another excuse to talk to him. Good thing he didn't have Edward Cullen's gift of reading minds. I shuddered @ the thought. I would definitely faint with humiliation once he knows what I'm thinking about. I guess, with the level of insanity my brain is going through, I have the only right to my thoughts.
"Uh-not really. I'm reading Eclipse now. I'm quite intrigued why you would hate Jacob Black in this book," he smiled.
"Then read it. Who knows you might wanna wring his neck later, too," I stuck out my tongue.
“Die. Jacob, die.” He laughed.
“You’re getting it now.”
He just answered with a nod. As usual, I was fighting hyperventilation & fainting. I looked away, laughing @ myself.
"What are you laughing about?" he asked.
"Uh- nothing," but I continued laughing, anyway.
"Edward Cullen talking to you again?"
"Why? Are you jealous?"
"I'm just curious."
"Rightttt..."
"Of course, I am curious. There hasn't been a day without you talking about how perfect Edward Cullen is," he defended himself. "Do you think I'm perfect?"
Why did he have to ask that question? How can I tell him yes but deny it @ the same time. Grrrrr... Does he really want me to declare myself? Over my pile of ashes! Yeah, right. I can keep telling myself that. I know that if I won't stop staring into his eyes, I'll be proposing marriage to him right away.
"Noooooooooo!!!" I voiced out loud.
"No, what?" he asked. "I’m not perfect or did Edward Cullen die?"
"That's not it. He can't die, remember? He's immortal."
"I thought you can kill a vampire, too."
"Oh, yeah. But Edward Cullen doesn't die. He doesn't die in my universe, anyway."
"Oh, yes. I forgot about that little big detail."
"What is it about Edward Cullen that you don't like, anyway?"
"What is it about Edward Cullen that makes you so defensive?" he countered.
"Give me one second..." I inhaled deeply. "But you have to give me your answer, too. Okay?"
"Deal," he promised.
Maybe out of habit or maybe I'm just being incoherent whenever he's with me, it took me another few minutes before I can come up with a satisfactory explanation.
"You know what? This whole situation feels like a debate between a Twilighter & an Anti. I say something about Edward Cullen & you negate it. Why can't you just see how ideal his character is? He may not be perfect, but he is ideal. I say not perfect, because he has his little quirks. But like I said, it only makes him more endearing, more human, therefore, more real than any of the human boys in this world."
"So, now I'm an Anti. Just because I asked you what is it about Cullen that draws you to him. Wait..." he started, as he noticed I was about to comment on what he said. "I didn't say I hated him. I am just really curious what is it about that vampire that makes you wanna talk about him every time...."
This excerpt is actually part of the later chapters. It starts with:
"Okay, so how about Kristen?" I asked. I was feeling rather stupid now for having asked that question. I hid my face under my arm.
"You should know better than to believe those stories. I'm here, which roughly translated, I'd rather die than stay away from you."
"Straight right out from the book," I muttered.
"Hey, I am supposed to know what's in the book. Blame it on your Bella Swan."
"Oh, shut up Mr. Know-it-all."
This kind of banter was becoming a rather natural occurrence these days. There isn't a day without him & me having this verbal sparring. Not that I'm complaining. I rather like it. It gives me the excuse to talk to him. He seemed not to mind, either. Which is perfect.
"Have you read all 4 books?" I asked. I really didn't know why I was asking. I guess I just wanted to have another excuse to talk to him. Good thing he didn't have Edward Cullen's gift of reading minds. I shuddered @ the thought. I would definitely faint with humiliation once he knows what I'm thinking about. I guess, with the level of insanity my brain is going through, I have the only right to my thoughts.
"Uh-not really. I'm reading Eclipse now. I'm quite intrigued why you would hate Jacob Black in this book," he smiled.
"Then read it. Who knows you might wanna wring his neck later, too," I stuck out my tongue.
“Die. Jacob, die.” He laughed.
“You’re getting it now.”
He just answered with a nod. As usual, I was fighting hyperventilation & fainting. I looked away, laughing @ myself.
"What are you laughing about?" he asked.
"Uh- nothing," but I continued laughing, anyway.
"Edward Cullen talking to you again?"
"Why? Are you jealous?"
"I'm just curious."
"Rightttt..."
"Of course, I am curious. There hasn't been a day without you talking about how perfect Edward Cullen is," he defended himself. "Do you think I'm perfect?"
Why did he have to ask that question? How can I tell him yes but deny it @ the same time. Grrrrr... Does he really want me to declare myself? Over my pile of ashes! Yeah, right. I can keep telling myself that. I know that if I won't stop staring into his eyes, I'll be proposing marriage to him right away.
"Noooooooooo!!!" I voiced out loud.
"No, what?" he asked. "I’m not perfect or did Edward Cullen die?"
"That's not it. He can't die, remember? He's immortal."
"I thought you can kill a vampire, too."
"Oh, yeah. But Edward Cullen doesn't die. He doesn't die in my universe, anyway."
"Oh, yes. I forgot about that little big detail."
"What is it about Edward Cullen that you don't like, anyway?"
"What is it about Edward Cullen that makes you so defensive?" he countered.
"Give me one second..." I inhaled deeply. "But you have to give me your answer, too. Okay?"
"Deal," he promised.
Maybe out of habit or maybe I'm just being incoherent whenever he's with me, it took me another few minutes before I can come up with a satisfactory explanation.
"You know what? This whole situation feels like a debate between a Twilighter & an Anti. I say something about Edward Cullen & you negate it. Why can't you just see how ideal his character is? He may not be perfect, but he is ideal. I say not perfect, because he has his little quirks. But like I said, it only makes him more endearing, more human, therefore, more real than any of the human boys in this world."
"So, now I'm an Anti. Just because I asked you what is it about Cullen that draws you to him. Wait..." he started, as he noticed I was about to comment on what he said. "I didn't say I hated him. I am just really curious what is it about that vampire that makes you wanna talk about him every time...."
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