Did the end disappoint you?

Blood Angel wrote:The abrupt ending sucked badly. There's still some hope for redemption though, if she continues to write in that universe, as she can flesh out exactly what the hell happens after the Volturi are thwarted.

The Cullens will be the next Volturi. And they will be called Royal Cullenates.

I hope not. The Volturi are effective at what they do, but the job makes them very heartless. They are also massive hypocrites with all their little human peons in the know running around while the Cullens are scared to death to tell Charlie (one guy) what the heck is up.

Trizn, keep on me about this fan fic. The discussion is good motivation for me. Something else key about our exterminator character is that he's 1700 years old and his gift is that no other gifts at all can touch him. Physical, mental nothing. (This ability can not be extended or turned off, however, so it is not always good) You can see some interesting implications of this gift in the world that SM has created. This is all revealed in chapter 1 anyway, so it's not a bit reveal. It's just more to see what people think and get some feedback.

Oh. What a gift. I'd like to see how Caius holds up to this exterminator. And how much Aro is disappointed that his mind cannot be read. Ah, Marcus... bored, as usual? Hehehe.

I still hope Caius diesssss. Not Aro, though. I can't bear the thought of Hugo Weaving dying. Yeah. I still see him as Aro. Agent Elrond Smith. Hahahah.

I'm thinking this exterminator is a cross-breed... or half-breed.

No, he's definitely not a hybrid. I have snippets of the story ready, but it's all in different places. Mostly some conversations I wanted to get onto paper, but I don't have a complete chapter yet. Discussing this makes me want to write, but I need to study electrochemistry.

I must admit I'm not much for comedy, but I have a scene planned where Bella tries to beat this guy up, not having a clue what his background is. I think the scene is quite amusing, especially for those who find Bella annoying. (I'm not in that group, I'm just saying)

Oh, I find Bella annoying. LOL. But the heck. Edward loves her.

Electrochemistry. Interesting word. Might google that one. Yeah, I would. I'm thinking, why not make an alternative to the Breaking Dawn "battle" scene? I'd like to see some real action. Maybe you can insert this exterminator & some real werewolves...

My story has a lot more to it than that. That's why it's long and tough to organize. There is a reason my character is not at the showdown in BD. Firstly, he no longer works for the Volturi; he quit working for them shortly before Carlisle arrived and secondly, he has been on a subsistence diet of very little human blood (no murders) since 1945. Consequently, he starts the story very weak. There would be no reason for the Cullens to know this character existed, since the Volturi never speak of him, which is an opportunity for interesting situations. There are reasons for all this, but again, no complete chapters. Right now it's kind of a redemption story, so there is a lot to explain.

I guess I am weird about fan fic. I don't like to rewrite parts of other's stories, even the ones I don't like. I also don't like using other's main characters as MY main characters. I like to insert my own main characters into someone else's world (since I am bad at making up an entire world) and have them interact with established characters.

Hence, I would never write a story about Jake and Nessie in school as a primary focus. However, I find it to be interesting and hope that others might find it interesting to explore what Jake's reaction would be if he encountered a character that had killed literally hundreds of Children of the Moon. Not the same as a shape-shifter, but close. Would Jake pick a fight (seems foolish, but its Jake)? What if he were forced to work with this individual?

I'm not necessarily planning this, but these are the kinds of things I like to write about. It feels less obtrusive to me; I'm merely just adding on or playing what if?, not changing core material.

I'm making some more notes while I write this actually, but now I really have to study some more electrochemistry. See you guys later.

Jake & his pack look like wolves. And the real werewolves look like half man, half wolf. So, this exterminator would know the difference. But what I'm curious about, is what he'd make of the Quileute tribe & the shapeshifting biz. Oh, I'd rather not read about a Jake/Nessie fanfic... A Seth/Nessie one would be better.

Actually for the plot sequence I have laid out, Jake and the shape-shifters are not in it much at all. Once I get the first couple chapters done, you'll see why. That was more of a theoretical situation.

To put things in perspective, my character quit doing "jobs" for Caius and the Voluturi in the 1630's, and has been laying pretty low since then as far as the vampiric world is concerned. The less the Volturi hear from this guy, the happier they are, since he is theoretically difficult to control. But, like the great line from Godfather III, "Just when I thought I was out... they pull me back in. "

Well, Bella did turn into a vampire...so there couldn't be any more happy ending, and "we lived happily ever after" thing is 100% accurate to the story..

I didnt HATE BD but I defo was disappointed. Mainly because -
- it all came together too neatly
- I also wanted a bit of a bigger fight at the end
- and I HATED, HATED, HATED Jacob imprinting on Rennesme. I just felt like his feelings for Bella all the way through were wasted and I felt kind of cheated. I wanted him to have a happy ending as I love Jacob but possibly him with Leah I would have liked better?
- I liked some parts Isle Esme etc but felt like it was all a bit rushed
and finally-
- I want more, I want to know what happens nexT!

tou-che Emma2 lolz... My sentiments exactly... ^^^

well, although i was disappointed to, you gotta admit that the story fell into place.

like if Jacob imprinted on someone else besides renensmee, then he probably would have attacked the cullens at the time renesemee was born.

i dont know, i liked it, but i just wish there was more action...it was really sad when Irina died tho =(....it would have been cool to watch the Volturi witnesses turn on the Volturi for seeing how full of poop they are!! and then everyone fight together to take them down...that would have been coool...oh well =)

The fanfic I'm working addresses my ideas about the Volturi and its history. Check it out under fanfic if you haven't already. The first chapter is obviously setup.

I defenetely hate the end of the book. I excepted a bigger fight. And I don't like Jake imprinted on Renesme. I think Jake is much better then have a friend forever.