When Alice said that Edward...

When Alice said that Edward he was in love with Bella & he didn't want to admit it, I felt all giggly. IDK if it was the right feeling, though. But I was thinking of Edward acting like a schoolgirl in front of her crush. I bet if he could've blushed, he would. For that moment alone, I would have like the whole Cullen family know what was in his mind so they'd understand what he was going through. Well, except Alice, because she already knows the 2 possibilities & that Edward didn't have the strength leave Bella anymore.

LOL. Me too, I felt like I was rly there!

I loved Alice more, after that.

Hehehe... oh Edward... he had it bad for Bella before she even knew it. I loved it.

More so when you read about him composing music once again. Very touching family event going on there.

~Ed

Yes, that part of Midnight Sun was really touching.

I loved that bit too. That whole discussion with the Cullens was awesome. And Edward was soooo sweet. Made me love him even more. And Alice too.
This is why we need MS finished...I'm looking at you SMeyer!

Yeah, I liked Edward MUCH better after Midnight Sun. My fan fic is going to have more rotating POVs, so I can tell a more complete story. My favorite fantasy author, the late great Robert Jordan did this, but I will still use the first person. I think the first person is powerful in emotional stories.

^ that sounds pretty cool. I like switches in POW in first person narratives.

The POVs in play will definitely include my main character and Bella. Don't worry, for those that find Bella annoying, there will be plenty for her think about other than how great Edward looks. I'm sure it will be in the back of her vampire brain, but there is no way I can reproduce that kind of sap. Not that I mind reading it, or I wouldn't be here, but there is no way I can write it. I am getting some enjoyment out of the passages that I have written where the exact implications of the showdown in BD are laid out for her by my main character. There's more on him in another thread, but let's just say he knows the Volturi very, very well.

Yeah I read that thread earlier. I have to say I really like the premise of your story. I think it could work really well and I look forward to reading it

Let me get past this electrochem exam and I should be able to generate the first chapter to see what people think. I can get the first chapter out faster by moving my Battle of Kursk flashback to a different spot. I think it works better after the reader knows the character a bit better anyway.

fawesome dude! yeah I get exam stress modulating your activity levels :S I'm not gonna be able to log into FB or here or TwiFo at all until Thursday night after tonight. I'm not gonna let myself near the sites until I get rid of my next 2 exams. After that I only have 3 more, and they're better spaced out.

I read the first 12 chapters....but since i read them on the pc...my eyes hurt...And Alice...well i've always loved Alice...
That part was really kinda funny and I'm going to try to print them so i can read them well...
the pc has been giving me major eye aches and headaches